Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2023 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 14 - The First Night [September 29th, 2006]

note to self: did Lori mention he's paying for their education? I remember he offered her the money... having the discussion would be hilarious, but probably she just did it (eventually she might use the subject for scolding them :)

more silly remarks:

- "paid every scent" :D

- "his behalf" => no punctuation at the end

Author's Response:

Ha; those might be the best ones