Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 16 2022 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Pre-Installation Screening [September 29, 2006]

Just a bunch of scattered notes as I usually do...

Becca went full "awww" when she saw her subject, not sure what it's going to be like now that she's already seen a tiny one

"excited to meet you" - random trivia: "eccitato" in Italian means sexually excited (unless you're taking about electrons), coming out of Jane's mouth it sounded funny to my ear :)

"Older than Beccawas"

It's a bit weird that DrWalker is so open ("the dignity" etc) with someone who still doesn't have her participant, but I love the way she thinks so I won't complain!

Author's Response:

You're right; I think "the dignity" part of her speech crosses the line on ambiguity.  Will remove just that part. Thanks!