Date: October 29 2022 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Rejection and Approval [September 30th, 2005]
Excellent chapter with more details as always 👏👏
And I hope to creat a story about a woman who does this housing operation without the need for money ,
meaning :: A married woman, for example, decided to take revenge on her husband by persuading him to go there, and they made him smaller and handed over to her forever. It will be a different and beautiful story
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. We'll see what happens
Date: October 26 2022 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Rejection and Approval [September 30th, 2005]
I'm 99% sure Dr. Walker is fully aware of the horrible fate these men go through and is pretending that they're fine with it and are giving proper consent to it - and I'm 99% sure this all is not for the actual experiment but simply her desire to see men removed from society and dominated by women. I think I'm in love ^^
Author's Response:
Interesting theory! I'm looking forward to hearing more from you :)
Date: October 25 2022 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Rejection and Approval [September 30th, 2005]
I will never not point out that the "real food" remark was better, even if technically a spoiler; nice to see Lori agreeing he's kinda spoiled after just one week... (but he stopped after 30 seconds instead of minutes, he's learning so quickly!)
typo - "tol stop"
as much as I love the image I didn't remember Lori lifting her feet, I'm getting older :D
"keep on reviewing the literature" - Lori reviewing the literature? (honest ESL question: do the instructions she received count as "literature" in English?)
I will bother you some more if have any idea about it; I haven't been on discord recently because your discord is the only one I ever visited and it seems they require a phone number now, dafuk?
Author's Response:
I don't think I recall the real food remark you're referring to. I don't remember removing anything like that from this chapter but I could be wrong. The "real food" situation is brought up for the first time during Becca's post-procedural debrief if I remember correctly.
Literature is sometimes used to refer to technical information but it is a bit unclear; I'll refer to it as what it actually is: the R&R Housing Guide...which is also in development as a fun appendix item FYI