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Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2022 9:14 PM Title: Bumping into Each Other

Will Sadie be in F/fm type of action? Rather than seeing another giantess, having companion on your tiny adventures is better. If you ask to be shrunken once, you should do it again.

Hoping not to see gene replication technology. Although it would be fun to see some power hungry woman trying to get the gene only to get shrunken to 6 inches or so for life.

Maximum the government can do without causing too much harm is making some temporary shrinking serum at the end of the story.



Author's Response:

Sadie will be in F/f and other types of action too, obviously she was shrunk before and she'll end up shrunk again, even if it's been years at this point in the story. As for what causes Allison's condition it will be explored a little bit, they don't necessarily want to replicate her genes just replicate the ability in any form.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2022 8:41 PM Title: The First Date

So theres a conspiracy on, of course they would completely do that. 



Author's Response:

Yep they've been watching Allison from the shadows for a long time now.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2022 6:53 AM Title: Bumping into Each Other

Also, Sadie is quite kinky. It would be interesting to see her in action.



Author's Response:

We will get to see Sadie in action.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 18 2022 6:23 AM Title: Bumping into Each Other

Inconsistency: 

She's not a man-shrinking mutant. She can shrink both sex. Also, does it work on animals? Insects? Not having to worry about mosquitos anymore is sure cool.



Author's Response:

She calls herself a "man-shrinking mutant as a kind of offhand remark, she does shrink women as well. Also yes it does work on animals and insects, but they can sense the chemical that causes the shrinking and will do what they can to avoid her or her victims. Call that great minds think alike because I have that particular detail about the mosquitos and ticks written in my notes lol, it's kind of a minor plot point in a later chapter but not a huge spoiler.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2022 8:18 PM Title: Bumping into Each Other

Oh yeah, I remember your greentext, and quality as expected of you!

Lets see where you take this this time.  



Author's Response:

This one will have more of a structured plot than the greentexts did, and more of a conflict, but I think the spirit of what made those enjoyable will carry over.

Reviewer: keithy159 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2022 2:17 PM Title: Bumping into Each Other

i love your down to earth storys . I cant wait too see more from you.

Author's Response:

Thanks, this one should be fun.

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2022 7:44 AM Title: Bumping into Each Other

Can you mention height? At least for Clark and Allison 

Author's Response:

I'll be sure to include it next chapter but for now

Clark 5' 10"
Allison 5' 4"

Sadie 5' 4"

Brick 6' 2"

Angie 5' 1"

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2022 7:30 AM Title: Bumping into Each Other

I was scrolling for good new stories, not looking at the author and when I pick something interesting based on description:

It's you again. What a surprise. How are you writing so much good stuff?



Author's Response:

I do my best lol. I have a lot of stories I'd like to do at some point sitting as outlines on my HD and I like to try different story structures out. Hope this one ends up being good!

Reviewer: unknown1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2022 10:41 PM Title: Bumping into Each Other

OH YES!~!! I remember reading your green texts that you posted here and this is DEFINITELY my favorite of them!!!  Can't wait to see a fleshed out full version!



Author's Response: I've been wanting to do a full novelization attempt on them for a while now, it's just a concept I really like. Hope you enjoy it!

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