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Reviewer: hunterfury22 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28 2022 10:35 PM Title: The Brink

Wonderful story you have my friend. I am very intrigued by it. I love Allison. I would love more of her dark side to come out. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! Allison has a complicated relationship with her dark side, obviously she would never want to give into it entirely, but it might be a part of her she needs before this all comes to an end.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 28 2022 1:01 AM Title: The Brink

Well after this, she will have to try it/target inanimate objects, and if she can do the revers (obviously by trying to do the opposite with the “limb”). If that’s possible that its easy to exercise, just shrink and unshrink objects around constantly and rapidly until somehow tiered (if it can be) and just get better. 

Easy. 

Then of course theres training range but that can be don latter, having having some live cameras all over the world and trying to do it all simultaneously. 


So lets see shat the doctor has to say, and maybe their theories or at least what that know definitively about Allison’s chemical-now power.  



Author's Response:

The mental aspect of it at least is probably something that could grow with more use, and she can probably get strong enough to regrow people at will rather than waiting for it to wear off. I don't think shrinking inanimate objects is in the cards but still Allison's power has dramatically increased and is only getting stronger. Trying to shrink the whole world over camera feeds is probably beyond her, a few people though? Definitely within the realm of possibility.

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