Reviews For The Neighbor Girl
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Reviewer: tinyguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2022 10:34 PM Title: Homecoming

Honestly wasn’t sure what to think of the story when I first started reading, but it’s grown on me more with each new chapter.

Eagerly awaiting the next installment. Can’t wait to see how far Allison’s shrinking powers can go!

Author's Response:

It's an odd meandering sort of story, half slice of life and romance, half conspiracy tale, but I'm glad you're liking it.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2022 1:24 AM Title: Homecoming


Well I decided to catch up, seems the ability is no contact based only, and can register extreme anger. I wonder what the range is, or if it could be even more targeted. 

Allison could get every grunt, agent, lawyer, scientists and the higher ups of this shady origination down to microscopic and only get Dr. Kendra to explain what going on at a mor manageable size. 

Seems like Allison is still going to make some people go squish for this, might make it expensive enough to make the org not try anything. Its not worth hunting someone down then they can get any of the grunts you send and got you many many years worth of scientists removed in no time. And of course it’s even harder if the board or heads just disappear, lots of power and management vacuum chaos from that. 


Lets see what happens and how much of the beans are spilled. 



Author's Response: Yeah the Lab has crossed a line where they've got to be dealt with one way or another, you don't piss off a girl with shrinking powers, particularly when those powers are getting more potent with time.

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