Well I want to jump in here and say a little something real quick. I wasn't really doing much other than just perusing nano stories and here I stumbled across this one. I've very glad I did.

Besides the beautiful imagery and descriptive language you use to convey the intent of the scene you have an understanding and power to denote scale with words that frankly isn't seen very much anymore. More so than most anything I've read recently I could feel how big this woman was and I loved it! It left me quite impressed. As this was a more recent edition I do hope this story is not concluded. I would love to see where you take it from here! :D