Reviewer: Zaximus Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2022 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Multitasking

Well I want to jump in here and say a little something real quick. I wasn't really doing much other than just perusing nano stories and here I stumbled across this one. I've very glad I did.

Besides the beautiful imagery and descriptive language you use to convey the intent of the scene you have an understanding and power to denote scale with words that frankly isn't seen very much anymore. More so than most anything I've read recently I could feel how big this woman was and I loved it! It left me quite impressed. As this was a more recent edition I do hope this story is not concluded. I would love to see where you take it from here! :D

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 21 2022 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Classroom

Good stuff. Albeit short, but still a nice way to end the chapter. 

Your writing style and prose leaves a very nice picture in the readers mind. It isn’t mundane or boring either, there’s a few language techniques and changes of tone or type and style too. A minor nitpick would be that while the sense of scale is conveyed, more time lingering on it would serve nice. At least in my opinion.

Overall, if this is for the long haul, it’s got promise.

Reviewer: fatal15 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2022 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Classroom

Very well written. I’m definitely interested in where this goes.