Reviewer: riveratthedoor Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2024 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 10: ASCENSION

Made an account just to say how much I enjoyed this.  Never read/seen anything that pushed so many of my buttons.  

The sexual fantasy, the supernatural power fantasy, the story, the world-building, the characters…loved it all. And I appreciated that there was no real cruelty and the sex was all enthusiastically consensual.

Really loved the shifting POVs. As a bisexual lady who likes the big role, I almost never see anything from that perspective, so that was amazing.  Women are rarely treated like actual people in these stories so it was really refreshing.

I could’ve done without the fight scene at the end (which felt a little forced) but that’s a minor complaint.

Would love to see this story expanded in any way!

Reviewer: submissivesl Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01 2023 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 10: ASCENSION

Great story! It made me thinking that it would be great if we were Goddess Ophelia's people

Reviewer: Curvograph Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2022 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 9: DEADLY RACE

Hi,

I have been meaning to leave a review for some time, but the moment never seemed right. After nine very solid chapters I feel your story is still quite underappreciated, so a review is in order.

As a fan of fantasy genre, I am in love with the setting and the very concept of your tale. The worldbuilding is done well, though this new, facinating world could have been explored to a better degree - for example by showing the readers its customs, traditions, history and geography throuh the eyes of common people. For now, as vast as it is supposed to be, it seems a bit small. An advice: explore secondary and tertiary characters, they create a more immersive background for the story.

The narrative is also done very well, though not perfect yet. I really like the use of POV sections as well as the differences between the respective narratives of your characters (Aurora's childish enthusiasm, Ophelia's maturity and internal strength coupled with self-doubt, etc.).

There is one more thing I would like to see improved: a problem on the intersection of narrative and pacing. What I mean is, to many things are told and to few shown. For example: the characters struggles are told to be long and tedious but they fail to impose the same feelings to the readers.

For now, a very solid story and an obvious 10/10. But with potential to become an all time great.

C

Reviewer: jin123 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2022 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1: NEW WORLD

Hello, I am one of your Chinese fans, I am sorry my English is not very good. I have a lot of ideas about this article, do you have a discrd or tweet, maybe we can communicate through those

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2022 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 6: FUN WITH ABILITIES

I can't wait for Ophelia to accept her destiny. 

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2022 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: NEW WORLD

An other perfect chapter. 

Reviewer: Ensar Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2022 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 4: LEARNING MAGIC

Can they spend time in your shoes?

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 24 2022 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: NEW WORLD

Another perfect champter love this story. 

Reviewer: IamtheWalrus Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2022 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: NEW WORLD

Howdy. I LOVE this first chapter! You have established the main characters very well and now that all of this needed character stuff as been established...we can possibly get to the sexy stuff in the next one! lol But in all seriousness, I look forward to seeing how you flesh out the dynamics that you have set up to varying degrees. But if I had to single out a single dynamic that I'm particularly eager for...I'd pick Ophelia and Nicky. I'm a sucker for the sweet young bimbo being with the hot but humbled mom so I'm looking forward to seeing how this change affects their relationship. Fingers crossed it becomes sexual! ;) lol. Either way, great job and please keep up the great work! :)