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Reviewer: girlfood Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 19 2010 6:53 PM Title: Reasonable Substitutions

this was well written and well done. i hope you keep writing.

Reviewer: johnson Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2009 7:56 PM Title: Reasonable Substitutions

Wow, well you've got my number!  I really enjoyed this and your other recent stories.  Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Star Sage Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2009 8:13 PM Title: Reasonable Substitutions

I will agree, I would have enjoyed him in the burger, or a sandwich, more, but still, well written and enjoyable, overall, I would like to see more from you sometime, especially if the more is unaware vore stuff.

Author's Response: thank you. Now that I know my stuff is being read I am deffinately encouraged to write more.

Reviewer: Knot Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2009 1:15 PM Title: Reasonable Substitutions

Well written, although considering the skill of the writing, a bit short for me (i.e. it's good, want more, haha) Can't wait to see what else you get to writing. I am also a big fan of the unaware, and I hope to see more of that in the future.

Author's Response: thank you. While not all of my stories will be unaware, it is a side genre that I enjoy.

Reviewer: Asukafan2001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2009 1:08 PM Title: Reasonable Substitutions

Very nicely written. Short and sweet. Good job!

Author's Response: thank you very much. I enjoy your stories and appreciate the work you've done for the community here.

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2009 12:28 PM Title: Reasonable Substitutions

Everyone have their own liking ;) So I liked that yoghurt part very much, as far as I like 'drink accidents'^^ Awesome to see someone else writing unaware stuff, hope you will stay it XD Cool story, 10 stars :)

Author's Response: drink accidents are awsome. My first gts vore experience was a dream involving one.

Reviewer: fated11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2009 10:34 AM Title: Reasonable Substitutions

great story only improvement would have been if he ended up in burger

Author's Response: thanks! I generally prefer something soft so that there's no mishap involving teeth.

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