Date: April 12 2023 11:01 PM Title: The start of something new
Nice to see an update to this story. Can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: September 09 2022 9:48 PM Title: The start of something new
love how Carrie goes from killing bugs to killing men without any hesitation. good job
[Report This]Date: September 01 2022 1:26 AM Title: The start of something new
Wow! This is an interesting premise. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm continuing to work and develop the story as time allows!
[Report This]Date: August 31 2022 7:21 AM Title: The start of something new
I like it! Carrie's reactions sounded like what an ordinary person would react to a real shrunken man. You also captured the setting of a newbie in a studio really well!
Excited to see what'll happen next! Perhaps Sam could give a broader explanation to Carrie about size fetish or the man justifying her actions that the shrunkees were bad-doers. :D
Author's Response:
I really appreciate your review and kind words! As a newbie with writing GTS stories I really didn't know how this would go, but your review (along with all of the others) has been a source of motivation for me to continue! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: August 31 2022 4:13 AM Title: The start of something new
Fantastic Story!!!
Can't wait to read more. Carrie's tits seem like Gods. Would be nice if a few of her future "victims" applaud her breasts for crushing / smothering them.Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I appreciate your input- I am working some of that into future chapters!
[Report This]Date: August 31 2022 3:19 AM Title: The start of something new
I’ve never once left a review on this site but uh, really good job dude! I like the whole morality take a lot. The story is down to earth asf. Much love 🔥
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words and I am honored to be your first review!