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Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 30 2022 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice beginning.  Will be interesting to see where this story goes.

Odd they did not take the previous stepped upon / crushed body as a portent.

Overall, a really good concept so far.


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