[Report This]Date: September 15 2022 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I like where this is going!
I enjoy the sensual dialogue between Steve and Melissa. There’s this hidden flirtatious behavior with Melissa while the stuff she is doing is actually all normal. Just like Steve, I find her actions quite interesting as if she was interested in me.
I also found it fun to watch as Steve tries to deny his shrinking and Melissa keeps trying to push him. It’s a great dynamic and I would love to see that expand as he shrinks even more.
I’m glad that Steve is shrinking fast early on. I always found the smaller, doll sizes much more enjoyable. Will Steve shrink that far, I’m not sure, but I think it would be fun to read about.
Also, I like how touchy Melissa is. Can’t wait to see how she touches or holds him later on.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!