[Report This]Date: August 03 2023 3:42 AM Title: Part 4 - Chapter 44
Hi, greetings Melanie. I love this story that you and Geno are writing. Each chapter is an engaging experience. When you start reading you can't take your eyes off and it makes you immerse yourself in the story until you even feel or imagine the scenes or the feelings of the person. It's good that you manage to convey those emotions because it certainly makes the reading have many nuances that make it very dynamic. Keep it up and thanks for sharing this wonderful story in the community.
As for the chapter, say that Nick's trauma came to light in a psychological way that is natural. But I would just like to say a phrase that is widely used in my country:
"The longest path begins with the first step."
I guess Nick took that "first step" in this chapter. Let's see how long it takes him to go down that path. Although the speed does not matter but to reach the end. :)
Author's Response: I agree with all of the above! Trauma is a sensitive issue and I wanted to address it with tact. It took a lot of work to write these chapters. Longer than any other in the entire story. Can you believe I had to do 4 rewrites? Every time I made a draft, it just wasn't...right. Something was missing. Getting both Nick and Sara's dialogue just right was hard. I hope the result is as good as Melanie and I hoped.