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Reviewer: Macroscope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2023 8:36 PM Title: Part 3 - Chapter 35

D'aww, this chapter was really endearing. It's so pleasant to read that Sara's beginning to warm up to the Lillis, seeing them as actual people... It goes to show what seeing the world from someone else's eyes can do for your perspective, huh?

I imagine that her earning the tiny citizens' trust will be an uphill battle, though, but I look forward to seeing her try someday. She seems to have taken a liking to Nick in particular... Wonder how she'd react if she knew he witnessed her eating Lillis alive that one time. That's going to be a harsh blow to the conscience.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Exactly, all it takes is an open mind and a willingness to learn.

Sara is going to take the spotlight soon, so look forward to that. Her role and development in this story is going to be important. That 'friction' you're predicting will hopefully play out in a satisfying way. As for Nick, well, you will just have to wait and see.

Reviewer: ro1994 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 26 2023 7:06 PM Title: Part 3 - Chapter 35

Love these "brobs seeing themselves from lili perspective" scenes, hope we see more.

And a heartwarming episode? this does feel like the calm before the storm. Accidents are bound to happen with this size difference~



Author's Response:

It's one of my favorite scenes to write! I can't have it every chapter, but you can expect it a few more times.

Don't be so negative, things can be happy without foreshadowing impending doom...

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