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Reviewer: Seff27 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 11 2023 8:44 PM Title: Part 2.5 - Chapter 24

Normally I can't read these "tiny city" stories, they always just keep me up at night from nervousness, but... this one is oddly refreshing.

I want to protect the tinies- or, "Lillis" in this case- and my nerves are just too much for me, always feeling nervous about what'll happen to the tinies.

I've been nervous about the classic "friend that's visiting finds the tinies" chapter, but the way Jeannine handled it was exactly how I would, it relieved SO much of my anxiety. It's over, and nothing bad's happened...


I'm sure you'll find many more ways to keep us on the edge, but I feel like I can finally relax a little. Thank you, this chapter was oddly comforting. I can't wait to see how Jeannine's attempt to get into that club goes!



Author's Response: I'm happy that it resonates with you. I was in the same boat, worried about all of the 'tiny city' stories. My worries were almost always confirmed when the giantess inevitably hurt them in some way. Casual cruelty is not something I enjoy, in fiction or in real life. I try to make my characters act realistically, as any decent person would.

Reviewer: RedSplotch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2023 3:43 PM Title: Part 2.5 - Chapter 24

I cannot wait to see the lilli reaction to that encounter!



Author's Response:

It might not be as extreme as you expect :0

Reviewer: Macroscope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 02 2023 11:06 AM Title: Part 2.5 - Chapter 24

Oh wow, when I made that prediction in my previous review, I didn't think it'd happen so soon! I was reading this chapter with bated breath, which I think says a lot about how invested I am.

Glad that that panned out okay, though I imagine there's going to be some fallout from this development. It's one thing for Jeannine to forgive her best friend, but I imagine Nick and the others won't be so quick to trust given what he's seen her do (and what she threatened to do immediately after discovering them)... This will require some delicate diplomacy on Jeannine's part.



Author's Response:

The fallout won't come immediately. Despite the scare, nothing actually 'happened' to the tinies thanks to Jeannine. It'll be up to her to keep things stable.

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