Date: January 12 2023 1:40 AM Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
I'm not sure if you realize this, but you have created a GTS community classic- a "one in a million story".
I'm usually not a fan of gentle but the interactions are so realistic and it is so well written I can't help fall in love with the story and its characters.
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you! I really don't think my story is that good, but I'm glad you think so.
I hope you'll continue to love them as the story continues. Personally, I think the best stuff is in Parts 3 and 4. I hope you'll leave me another review when those chapters are out! :)
[Report This]Date: January 01 2023 1:01 PM Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
Great story so far! Am I missing something or has Part 1 Chapter 8 been partially deleted somehow?
Author's Response:
It was missing, apparently. No clue how that happened...
Thanks for letting me know, and for the kind review. I hope you enjoy the fixed version!
[Report This]Date: December 29 2022 8:38 AM Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
I love the story, and the emotions are great, but the size of the liliputans doesn't make sense. You say the are a quarter of a milimeter which would mean you would barely be able to see them, or not see the at all. But in your story you act as if they are quarter of a centimeter, half a centimeter, or even a centimeter. I love the story but this is just a nit pick, and a suggestion to go back and make the height a little taller.
Author's Response:
The size of the Lillis remains consistent throughout the story. It is possible to see things that are 0.25mm with the naked eye, even more so if you are leaning in close. As for making out their expressions without the aid of a magnifying glass, I can see why that might not be as believable. That is why I described Jeannine's ability to 'see them' as more of her picking up on body language, such as waving their arms around. You make a valid point, but be mindful of the wording in the scene. I'm very committed to realism, and I hope that shows!
Date: November 23 2022 6:55 PM Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
J’adore, mais pourquoi pas mettre de l’inconscient ? Et du pied?
Author's Response:
Merci! Désolé, je n'ai rien prévu de tel. Ce n'est pas une histoire axée sur les perversités sexuelles.
Date: November 17 2022 6:08 AM Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
Super histoire, peut-être qu’un groupe de petits pourrait partir en exploration de l’appartement de Jeannine, inconsciente?
pour voir le monde gigantesque
Author's Response:
I will consider it. I like the idea.
Je vais prendre cela en considération. J'aime l'idée. (I hope this translated correctly!)
[Report This]Date: September 22 2022 7:14 PM Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
Great work so far, really loving the character work so far, they all feel like people with actual thoughts. Naturally, my guilty side is a little sad Jeannine has taken more of a backseat these past few chapters. But that will likely only make it better whenever she has her next "thorough" interaction with her Lilliputian "Colony". I am curious to see what you have planned.
Also I saw what you meant about formatting in your review to my story. I have no idea how that happened in the last chapter, fixed now. (Apparently you can't edit review replies so I thought I'd let you know here)
Never go wrong with an enormous sweetheart! Though being the number-weirdo I am, I can't help but wonder what scale factors you used between the sizes. As in, I wonder how tall Jeannine would be in Lilli measurements.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Your “A Micro’s Perspective” is such a pleasure to read too. Keep up the good work!
Rest assured, Jeannine will have many chapters in the future. Everyone gets a turn, but she will always be the focus.
The scale factors I used were approximately 1:72 between each race. That means 1:72^2 for Lilli-Brob conversions. There’s actually a very useful tool on this site called “Giantess Converter v3.05”. I use it alongside my own, more specific calculations.
[Report This]Date: September 05 2022 7:33 AM Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
I super love this. For real, I'm really excited about it. Thank you for sharing this! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you for your continuing positive reviews, Wholia! I plan for this to be at least 40 chapters (probably more, in all likelihood) so strap in.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2022 9:30 AM Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
I super love this already! Really, it's incredibly difficult to find something like this, as you said. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! That means so much to me.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2022 5:56 AM Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
This seems like it will be an utterly adorable story with the perfect Lilli-Brob dynamic. I have to admit there's something nice about a gargantuan lady being so nice and gentle with the literal specks. Not having anything lewd isn't really my style, but it's bound to be great regardless of that stuff.
I look forward to more cuteness between our lovely Brob landlord and her nigh-microscopic "tenants"! Good up the good work!
Author's Response:
I hope to live up to your expectations! :)
[Report This]Date: August 27 2022 2:50 AM Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
Oops, forgot to leave a star rating! 10/10
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! I hope you'll keep reviewing as the story continues.
Date: August 27 2022 2:50 AM Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
Fantastic. Finally, a good micro story. Please, please, please post more, and quick!
Author's Response:
I'm posting when I can. Be prepared for infrequent uploads for the time being.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2022 5:49 PM Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
Great story, good start. Waiting for.more
Author's Response:
Thanks :D
[Report This]Date: August 24 2022 5:41 PM Title: Prologue - Chapter 1
Good start.
Also got stories I had ideas for 10 years ago still around that I wanted to write up and put on this site. So congrats on achieving it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It was a long time coming.