Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2023 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 12, The New Age

Well well well, I may not have read your flagship Alpha-Beta story, so I don't know what goes on in that, but you can write a ... uh ... "Tango" scene quite well. Not so explicit that it's disgusting and voyeuristic, but also not so symbolic and esoteric, we had to open up some Freud to decode when Tab J enters Slot G.

Overall an intriguing read that all started from simple lads wondering what having a sea-based waifu with sharp teeth as a giantess would pan out. And now, all us denizens are having to write Tolkien-length appendixes about the trillion-year history of our realms, and which action figure has the mega-ultra-super-saiyan-sharingan-devil fruit to beat the other. So thank you for the reality that anon, Uber, myself, and Kardo when he gets out of his funk, will be chained to this series for as long as Cathay lives. Thank you Viper, for forcing us to give up our dreams for the never-ending trauma machine.
Also, Mumen rider can totally solo Cathay.

Author's Response:

I don't think I even have a scene quite like the 'tango' here. At least nothing as refined (for lack of a better word cause my brain is the square). 

It was a fun story to write, one which I'm looking forward to continuing. Let this be a proper demonstration of the power of peer pressure and eldritch waifus, Comrade. The engine of trauma will never sleep, and now neither will any of us Eldritch Sweetheart writers. Prepare thineself for now we serve only the eldritch!

Mumen Rider may best Cathay, but can she outshine Valerie?!?!