Reviewer: anonwriter111 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2022 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 4: Demons of the Past

Dang, were those descriptions of Gilah’s sheer brutality and unmatched strength incredible. And with how vividly she remembered each and every bit, I can’t even begin to truly grasp what it must feel like to be her in that situation as she relives it again and again. 

Solid work, Viper!

Reviewer: Divediveburners Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2022 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 4: Demons of the Past

Disclaimer: I don't know this man at all, he just babbles on about shark waifus, then says "good idea Dive!" while he plasters my name in association with this monstrosity. It's also hard to type this while being tied to a chair.

But with that out of the way, I might as well review the sequel to "A Monstrous Mate." Gilah is as glorious as she was in the previous tale. The contrast between her monstrous power, and her care and tenderness towards Jason is the most compelling part of her character. 

Cathay ... is a piece of work, that's all I'll say about her.

This latest installment was indeed a doozy. Gilah most certainly takes after the Klingons, or the Vikings, seeing battle as a purifying ritual. Going up against all those monsters from all corners of the universe is quite a feat ... I wonder what cosmic horrors she could have encountered... 
The bloody imagery, and Gilah's bloodlust in the first part of this chapter is portrayed clear as crystal, and it is glorious. Bursting through the head of a shinigami evokes quite the image, I must say.

The scene with Jason was a much needed cool down, although I believe a shorter answer to Gilah's burning, "Am I a monster?" question would have done the trick. The paragraph he exposits felt like a bit too ... expositiony, it kind of took me out of the flow of the story. 

But that's my only nitpick, I look forward to what will happen next. And please let me go, I have a family.