Date: August 16 2022 10:36 AM Title: Ethnic Food (Hard Vore, F/m, F/f)
"I didn't want to join the "Free the Tinies" movement to not draw any unwanted attention, yet I cringed every time I saw someone from the rival group, especially when they dramatically demonstrate how they think Norms should treat Tinies." - I just realized: Are there PeTA-like organizations on either side of the argument?
"Maybe if I can somehow sneak into the train home I might survive." - Is that supposed to be a "hope" instead of a "home"? Even if, this sentence is just weird.
"It was cramped and diminishing." - I thought Shrunks would be beyond the point of "diminishing"? :P Given this clearly unhygienic storage - Can people with the Tiny Gene contract the Virus and shrink even smaller?
Generally, diseases are a problem with Tinies. Wild Tinies live without actual clothes, proper healthcare, etc. (I sound like an ad for "Farm-bred Tinies"...) Yet there is a reason living livestock fell out of style after refrigeration was widespread. Dead Meat cannot contract diseases... Sure, it can spoil but that's easier to prevent.
"[...]Tinies are being exported to other countries, something about different flavor." - That sounds like utter bogus to me. Wouldn't the Shrunk's stature (fat-height ratio in particular) influence their taste and not their nationality(which is revoked in the moment of Shrinking anyway)? Also, this is never mentioned in Vore Stories, but I would shave the head of the Tinies I am about to consume. Hair is neither tasty nor digestible.
"Above me, there's the face of an eastern European woman in her 50's." A Spelling Mistake again, also a good idea of you to have the pred be a person in their 50ties. Usually, this role is always fulfilled by a beautiful young woman due to... let's call it happenstance.
I like this first short story. The journey of Tom, the Norm with the Shrinking Gene to his final fate as a Shrunk (ingredient) ;) is a good introduction to this world. It gets how much the Norms don't care for Tinies across well.
Author's Response:
Hey there! Thank you very much for this review again!
- About organization like PeTa and such- well it depends on the story. On each story that it is relevant I try to write about it briefly. To be honest in most of the stories I try to focus more on the being eaten part, the background is just "another excuse" to get you there.
- "... sneak into the train home..." No I did not mean "hope", I meant home, as if "the train towards home" or "the train that will take me home". I thought that writing "the train home" is understandable enough. English is not my main language, maybe a native English speaker would write this sentence differently.
- That's the point, shrunken people still see themselves as regular human. They have false hopes that society will treat them equally.
About mixing genes with virus and getting extra small- Maybe, I don't know. If such a thing would have happen it would probably be rare, and the final size will be really small, less than a millimeter, which is hard to find. If such people exist, they would probably just disappear without someone noticing them to actually study the phenomenon.
- Well, people who came from different places in the world are exposed to different foods, different ingredients, different environment. This might cause different flavors when they are shrunk and eaten. Is that actually nuisance? Maybe. Does that stops Norms from eating different Tinies, believing that different race or origin resulting in various tastes? No.
About the hair - LOL. I am bald, and so I usually forget to specify and write that the shrunks hair is sometimes being removed (if processed). Generally, I don't always full describe appearances of characters, so the the reader can imagine them however they like, according the the association that was build in their head.
- As said and mentioned, misspelling and better grammar is something that I try to improve. And yes, I LOVE mature women preds.
Thank you, I'm glad you liked this one.
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