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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2022 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Back to school

I admit, I haven’t read your other stories that come before this one, but I was still able to understand and enjoy this chapter. 

One thing that really stood out to me was how realistic Linda was. She felt like a real person and not just a cliche teacher you would find in most stories. So I really enjoyed reading about her and I’m actually rooting for her. 

I like the idea of Max and his gang and how they all grew over the summer. Just that thought makes every new year tougher for the teachers.  

I loved how Barbara treated her extras. Trapped against her nipples. Part of me thought Linda might be jealous when she saw how those extras her placed. I’m not sure what plans you have for Linda, but if she gets a tiny extra to play with, I think that would be great. 

Then we get Fred. He easily reminds me of myself. I also thought it was hot when Linda confronted Max and his group. I guess Fred likes to see Linda in control so perhaps we might get some intimate moments with her. 

Anyway, I enjoyed the start to this story and I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind review. I hope you're not too disappointed by the time the story's over ;) You can get a better understanding of Fred's personality from the previous story, and he might also get a little standalone backstory someday.

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