[Report This]Date: September 16 2023 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
Absolutely love the overly stern, domineering mother/guardian/teacher all in one vibe from Evangeline. This scene in particular is just so evocative:
“I… but she… she can´t take my car…” He asserted.
“Well, now she can. I believe she said you should be taller than 4´8”, now… I don’t think your 4´7” height is above that range.” 4´7”? He was down to 4´7”?
He felt overwhelmed. He nearly stumbled. This couldn´t be happening. Just yesterday he was above 5´, and now, now he´s half way down to 4´.
“Larry, I know this is hard. You were doing so good. Why can´t you accept the fact that people are only trying to help you. Even I came to advice you that you should listen to her. But you refused to. Now, there´s no way you can´t. Next time you see her, you´ll have to give her your keys.”
The entire menagerie of women are awesome, each one brings a different flavor. Hope that we see more of all of them and they just keep casting larger and larger shadows.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I´m glad you liked this chapter! And Evangeline, glad she´s quite a lovely character.
I´m glad this scene gave so much thrill to the chapter too. And as you say, each woman on the story is different and brings a little more to the story.
And trust me, there will be plenty more ;D