Reviews For Divine Chastise
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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2023 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 10

I like Nellie. You could tell she wants something from him. She makes eye contact with a guy and decides to visit his house. Rarely is someone that forward unless they have extra motivation. 

Kinda cool how Grace is part of this situation too. This dinner is going to be fun. I could imagine the 3 them at a dinner table. Grace near Larry while Nellie is sitting facing him. During dinner, she could extend those long legs of hers and place them on his lap for some fun. Lol. It would be fun to see him concentrate then. 


Good chapter and I can’t wait for the next one! 



Author's Response:

Nellie is quite motivated :) And Grace is just a growing menace, XD. Thanks for the comment, hope you like the new chapter :D

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