Reviews For Divine Chastise
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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2022 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow! So much happened this chapter! 

First off, I like how Tina was the one to invite him to her place. Some ideas began floating around for me wondering, “what if Tina does some harassment to Larry” or something. Would Evangeline let it happen, would she interfere. The fact that Tina took the lead for a bit made me wonder that. 

Just like Larry, I also wondered if any of the sex would be forbidden for Evangeline. Such as maybe she wanted Larry to go down on Tina and worship her before engaging in intercourse. It’s cool to see how she let that sex just play out and no do anything. Also, it was cool to see Tina and Larry both orgasm. 

Good idea with the leaving Tina part. She asked Larry to stay and he is leaving her much to Evangeline’s disapproval. I also like the “1 inch for every warning” type rule. 

When Evangeline said “see you in the morning” I thought Larry might drive off to find another woman to fuck. Lol. Maybe I got carried away with my thoughts, haha! 

Interesting to see Larry deal with his neighbor. I can’t believe she used the porno line. I wonder if Evangeline even picked up on that. Maybe she actually thought the neighbor wanted some house help. Lol. 

Ah meetings. I wonder how many coworkers he has that are women. I could imagine that since he is the boss, that he hired only hot women and now he’s entering a room full of them ready to tower over him. Could be really exciting soon. 

Well, I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you TomSpeedy, I´m glad you liked the chapter, and also the "1 inch" rule. I´m constantly thinking on things like that, to give some more to the plot.

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