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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2022 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

I’m glad that Larry is shrinking more this chapter. Interesting to see him as tall as his date. 


The part about touching her butt in public was the reason for shrinking seems odd to me since I see it often in real life, even among couples that both agree to it. If they were in a public park or on a bus, I think that would be more inappropriate. But in a club, there’s all sorts of “indecent” actions which I’ve understood to be sort of accepted in such a setting. 


Although for this case, Tina “trembled” a bit. When I read that, I thought she was about to orgasm or something from that kind of tremble. I guess “winced” would’ve been a better word to show that she was uncomfortable with the touching to her butt. 


Also, you could argue that he was simply being forward and if Tina accepted his advances, it would’ve been ok. Since she didn’t like it, then Larry knows not to do it again. If he touched her butt immediately after, ignoring her discomfort, then I think it would make more sense to shrink him. 


Idk, I’m just used most adult clubs to be super crowded and everyone is touching and groping each other to the point that most people dancing are simply used to it. 


Besides that, I really liked seeing Larry still try to fight Evangeline. Their banter is great and I’m excited to see her become enraged and take off even more inches. 


I can’t wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback TomSpeedy :D

Sorry if the butt part felt kind of... forced, but I thought since she was an angel, who´s supposed to be pure and good-willed, then she´ll have a different perception of what´s allowed and what´s not, talking about public touching. Still, I think I was just looking for an excuse to take an inch away LOL.

Hope you like the new chapter as well

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