[Report This]Date: June 27 2023 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yes
A virus make mature Moms and Milfs so huge and thick and sexy.
Every family will have 12ft tall sexy mother as their queen.
Thank you
[Report This]Date: June 24 2023 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice
I wish we have more growth for Grace, Milf should grow much bigger and hotter than girls.
Author's Response:
A bunch of giant, mature women, sounds nice...
[Report This]Date: July 30 2022 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
Whoa! This story sounds awesome!
The best part is easily the dialogue. The conversation between the Angel and Larry is so fun to watch. I can’t wait for Larry to shrink even smaller.
One thing I wonder is that could other people see the Angel or only Larry? If she’s invisible, it could be funny to have other people see Larry talk to himself.
So far, I like this start and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks. And yeah, if people see him talking to no one, haha, it would be quite embarassing... for him.
The dialogs are quite something for this story. The interactions between him and the angel. I'll try my best to make them nice and funny. Hopefully I can do so in the upcoming chapters.
[Report This]Date: July 30 2022 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice start. There are a few pronoun errors, but nothing that distracts from the story. Great concept, will be interesting where this story goes.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'll work on it, but I'm glad it's something minimal. I'm glad you liked the concept. It was an idea that grew on my mind thru some time and now, it's about to become a nice story. Hope you like where I take it :D