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Reviewer: VanStarryNight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2022 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

An enjoyable read. Nothing quite beats the theme of unaware survival among friends and coworkers.


I must ask, why the vore tag? I was hoping for some mouth play based on this, though the lack of it isn't the end of the world.



Author's Response:

Oh shit sorry! I put that there on accident, I’m on mobile and it wouldn’t let me get rid of it :(

Reviewer: Mr Decadent Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 29 2022 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

I enjoyed the story a lot!


A part of me was hoping that Mary would have another can of spray, thus rendering their sacrifices pointless in a dark ending where she kills them all anyway lol. But it's satisfying to read that all of Alix's hardship paid off in the end.



Author's Response:

thanks!!!


i mighta gone for that tbh, but there was such a long gap between the last paragraph and the end of the story i kinda just wanted it to be finished lmao

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