Date: September 05 2022 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
So when are u going to release chapter 2?
Date: July 24 2022 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Also just a question is this girl like a vaulkuray or like who much muscle we talking about because u used term greek goddess and there usaly depected muclecler athletic
Author's Response:
Oh you mean her name? No it's just a coincidence. I really wanted her name to come from her eyes haha.
You can imagine her body however you want, but I did not give any muscle descriptions.
In my mind she just looks like a perfect woman, slim, but not malnourished, with soft sexy curves and lean belly, which would probably show some abs.
I did not really describe her body that thoroughly, you have a lot of room for imagining her as what would be a perfect sexy young goddess in your preference :)
Date: July 23 2022 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
There is only one other story like this ive seen on the site but it starts off with goddess already loving the man and being way more cruel to everyone eles
Compard to that i like that this shows back story and hope you continue this that story had aleast 4 chapters i believe and it summed up there relation ship good i like this tho but felt to short to me pls continue
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! I am already writing a continuation, though I don't know how long it's gonna be.
[Report This]Date: July 23 2022 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story and think it works well as a one shot leaving the mystery if she’s just going to eat him any open but would love to see you continue it if it’s something you’re interested in doing.
spelling was a bit off in places not that it detracted from the story at all and from what you said in your bio English isn’t your first language and I doubt I could even begin to write a story in yours.
I really like the nice to one but cruel to others stories which I can’t get enough of so again I would love to see this continued.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
Glad you liked it.
I will look for the mistakes and correct them when I find time, thanks for letting me know. Could be typos too haha
I am definitely writing at least one more chapter.
Date: July 23 2022 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Seems like a pretty good story, hope to seem more and where this relationship will end up going.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!