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Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2022 6:09 AM Title: On the Eve of Battle

Excellent chapter! You had Adam call Kira “Nea” once, but I’m really enjoying seeing Zetans at least learn to accept human aid. Though…I do enjoy the F/m parts the most ;D

Author's Response:

I swear I do proofread these things lol, I guess it slipped through, fixed it.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2022 4:33 AM Title: On the Eve of Battle

Preety good speech, and a fair strategy of softening up on a siege, and then a full military force some from behind to get them suck and finish them. But the battle will have to be seen. 

And who knows how this speech will be received by the whole alliance. 

And the after processing of at least arresting Zeta forever on the attempted assassination alone. 



Author's Response:

Zeta Forever is going to be in legal trouble regardless of how heroic they are in the battle, I mean they almost overthrew the Empress lol.

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