[Report This]Date: August 04 2022 1:30 PM Title: Aces and Eights
Besides the obvious for Jolene to have her mansion, enjoying her days with her zetans and have a normal colony to runs some businesses in the side (the latter makes sense), but with everything I’ve said better, being self sufficient able to sell food even sounds also like a good business, and Jolene could have some enjoyment from developing that ‘small’ part of her colony (even miniature habitation modules to have volume, space, and food, and not the other things)
A whole side story could be made of the zetans, maybe some humans that eventually came along, trying to develop new things to entertain Jolene and make them practical for her uses (in both meanings). She already has a military shrink ray, give her engineers some more engineering equipment and time, and I be they could make it more practical for her (even if not to mass produce), then use it for her own purposes.
Author's Response: I'm sure she'd like to play goddess to some micro sized people, at the very least her four crewmates will probably end up staring down some time at ant size or smaller.
Date: August 04 2022 11:53 AM Title: Aces and Eights
@Greenanon Sounds good to me. Focusing on the giantesses is what makes the occasional role reversal with a male giant so enjoyable.
Speaking of future stories, any idea what you’ve got in store once this work is wrapped up?
Author's Response:
I'll probably go relax for a few days and maybe just do a one shot or two before starting any new long ones or continuing any others. I've got a bunch of ideas and short outlines for different stuff, if I do start another longer story soon it'll probably be another silly lighthearted affair like Landlady is a Real Witch.
Date: August 04 2022 8:49 AM Title: Aces and Eights
Finally. First M/f interaction. Congratulations. There is always a first time.
Author's Response:
Like I've said to other reviewers it's not my usual thing, but it just seemed to fit the circumstances perfectly.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2022 5:53 AM Title: Aces and Eights
Well you have once again proven that not only do you have writing chops, you have the damn tenderloins of writing.
Dear goodness man, did you marry the muse? You're unreal.
If I spent the time writing everything I liked about the story so far, I wouldn't be able to go to sleep tonight. So I'll try to be brief(relatively).
Love all the side characters, they are truly awesome. The small part with the ship that we never saw again with the Zetan male, was great.
Jolene, rawr, she's one hell of a lady. I'd be interested in getting punished by her.
Princess Nea has had a fantastic character arc. I was wondering how I would end up rooting for her. The best thing about her is that it's clear she was always misguided, never truly evil.
Question, and it's cool if the answer is as the story requires, but I'm a bit unclear on how durable someone is when shrunken. Is it something that requires powerful stomping(with armor or something) at a couple of inches. Is it also that Zetans are just more durable all around. Lots of people died from getting squished, but Kurt was in between Nea's toes(lucky guy) getting squeezed by them(again lucky guy).
Was Kurt at all inspired by Captain James Tiberius Kirk who also has escapades with green women.
That scene with Smith at the top of this chapter gave me a funny mental image. Kurt decides to not only be a complete Earthling, but a complete American. So instead of whatever royal consort attire he should wear, he shows up to the big celebration in a black leather jacket, tight black jeans, fingerless black gloves, a bandanna just for the hell of it(maybe even stripes painted on his face too) dressed straight out of the 80s just to have fun with the Zetan expectations.
Author's Response:
I spent a lot of time plotting this one out and coming up with the supporting cast, so it's good to see they work. I really wanted to use the side characters to give a more complete look at the world, let the reader see how the main characters actions impacted everyone.
As for durability when shrunken it goes up a little bit, it would be difficult to crush someone on a soft surface with a bare foot, on a hard surface or with shoes? Yeah it's very easy for full sized people to crush shrunken ones. Kurt is relatively safe in Nea's sandals (or other footwear) and most of the time when she's squeezing him with her toes she's not trying to seriously hurt him.
Between the green women and the Iowan main characters yeah there is definitely a star trek influence here, among other sci-fi franchises.
I imagine that the Empress's consort will probably help Smith pick out clothing that, while Zetan, has an "earth flair."
Date: August 04 2022 4:58 AM Title: Aces and Eights
So the starring couple are switches it seems. The idea of the dominating Zetan girl punished for her over eager shrink ray via her human lover fucking her into an moaning puddle seems very enticing. Especially if she responds to such revenge by just shrinking him more often to keep earning such enjoyable "punishments". I had assumed they would both be at full size when such a thing happened but this is fun too.
Author's Response:
Nea will probably get fucked into a puddle at some point in the traditional fashion, and yeah they're both switches I guess you could say lol.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2022 4:09 AM Title: Aces and Eights
For someone who’s never written M/f stuff, you did a damn good job for your first attempt!
The whole thing fit seamlessly into the rest of the story, added some nice variety, and was detailed and well-written as always.
While it’s not everyone’s cup of tea, I personally wouldn’t mind if you found more opportunities to slip some M/f content into your future stories if it’s as well-crafted as this ;)
Author's Response: M/f isn't my usual thing but I don't really mind it, in this case it seemed right for where the story was in that moment. I might do other scenes like it in future stories but giant girls is probably always going to be my focus.
[Report This]Date: August 04 2022 3:39 AM Title: Aces and Eights
Another well done chapter. And you did a good job on the big male tiny girl.
Oh and what things would be done by Jolene at her colony, like she said its doesn’t need to be the best one.
Author's Response: There are a number of things she could do with even a less than ideal world, mostly she would want to plop herself down in a huge mansion with her pet Zetans and be left alone, but she could set up a trading post and refueling station for ships going into deeper space, she could do resource extraction, she could use the climate for specialist agriculture, the possibilities are really endless. Of course most of that boring stuff is the kind of thing she'll probably recruit some settlers to do while she fills her days with sport and leisure.