[Report This]Date: July 26 2022 5:21 AM Title: Captives
This is the best story I have read in years!
There's infinite potential with this one. I also love all the subtle underlying themes.
I just hope you don't get bored with it and forget about it.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you're enjoying. Like my other story One Year Lease I did a lot of outlining and notes before starting the story so the path is fairly straightforward and is mostly just putting words to paper. I'm trying to update daily or every other day, should be another one later today actually.
[Report This]Date: July 25 2022 10:10 PM Title: Captives
Really liking the story and world so far. It's a nice sci fi take on the giantess genre, and I think you've done a great job with the world building and character interactions so far.
I also like the concept of basically Amazon space orcs, but with a slight twist, and specifically the characterizations of the Zetans.
Interesting to see Kurt's reaction with the princess and her demands/teasing, and his reactions, especially with her feet. Hoping to see more interactions and/or possible forced sweaty foot worship between Kurt and the princess or with other Zetans.
Looking forward reading more, I'm definitely excited for this story. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like the plot and the characters, I put a lot of thought into them before I started charting the world and I'm hoping by the end everyone is happy. The Zetans are, like humans, a lot of things, the Princess obviously believes she's part of a proud warrior race, and when they first made contact with Earth they were definitely not nearly as nice as they are now, and they're not that nice now lol. There will definitely be foot teasing/worship later in the story, Kurt's definitely into all of that even if he doesn't want to surrender to an evil alien princess.
[Report This]Date: July 25 2022 1:43 PM Title: Captives
I’m invested.
Author's Response:
Good to hear, your stories are really plot-focused so it's nice to see that this one has your interest!
Date: July 24 2022 11:21 PM Title: Captives
Nice chapter.
If I was Kurt being stepped on by Princess Nea I would be tempted to say, “joke's on you I’m into that shit”.
Author's Response: Yeah I have a feeling for most of the people who come to a site like this it wouldn't make a good "torture" lol.
[Report This]Date: July 24 2022 10:08 PM Title: Captives
Love that Telmas point of view is getting some development even if she wasnt as extreme as Nea in her distaste for humans, Im excited to see how her relationship with Joey affects her perspective now that hes got his cool back. Also I find myself relating with Kurt especially when he mentioned hed be willing to die for his pride. That hit too close to home for me and its exactly how i felt throughout that scene. Probably not a good thing survivability wise but id wanna go down with some fight in me. Cant wait to see how or if Kurt gets her back!
Author's Response:
It's one thing to say "I'll die before I surrender!" it's a little harder to say "you can squish my best friend too!" Kurt obviously has plenty of fight left in him, even if he feels like he needs to play along for now.
[Report This]Date: July 24 2022 8:22 PM Title: Captives
Being totally honest, the alien giantesses are just not doing it for me, and I doubt I’ll be able to get into the human bounty hunter either.
Despite that, I’d say this is one of the best chapters I’ve read from you. The plot is so wonderfully written/well thought out that I still found myself wanting to read more.
If this chapter is a Preview of how engaging your future installment/stories will be, I’m all in, smut or no smut.
Author's Response:
Sorry the green skin isn't doing it for you, but if you're here for the plot I think you'll like it!
[Report This]Date: July 24 2022 7:24 PM Title: Captives
Really good story thus far!
Author's Response:
Thanks!