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Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 07 2022 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

nice use of the woman in the beer hall. glad he got away from the terrible 12 yr olds



Author's Response:

I debated on making them older, but decided they were more menacing as kids. Children that age are amoral, and more likely to cause problems; an adult would be more likely to help the shrunken guy.

Reviewer: timescribe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 07 2022 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

nice use of the woman in the beer hall. glad he got away from the terrible 12 yr olds

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