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Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2022 7:56 AM Title: The descision

Nice, I like the set up here for how Anna feels a bit uncomfortable about the ordeal, but ultimately does it anyway. 

I wonder why Beatrice called her a pervert though in chapter 1?

Reviewer: zhangkui Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2022 5:43 AM Title: The descision

The idea of this article is really great and I can't wait to see the updates



Author's Response:

Thanks! I´m glad you like it! :D

Reviewer: D W Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 12 2022 3:11 AM Title: The descision

Nice story, though I'm with Clover.  They need to get out and explore Anna's ass.

One thing, just to be clear, the anal beads are not inside of Anna right now?  For the weekend?  After all, they can see her in the room with them.  Sounds like she doesn't have them inside for now.

You might be interested: https://aryion.com/g4/view/801974

I did those years ago; but your story reminded me of them so I posted a few of them.

You do have a lot of grammatical errors.  They do not take away from the story however.

Well done, can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!
I know I have some grammatical errors, I try to avoid them but English is not my native language, I hope is not a big inconvenience

Reviewer: Carl2796 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11 2022 8:19 PM Title: The descision

Love this story it’s pretty good 



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

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