[Report This]Date: July 23 2022 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
Absolutely EXCELLENT Story!!!
I have to say, I can not comment upon it without giving away to much detail; so I shall leave it upon the reader to enjoy.
Let's just say James is one lucky / blessed tiny guy; and Carol is all that and more.
A story well worth reading.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you had fun with it.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2022 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
Absolutely amazing story, enjoyed it thoroughly from start to finish. Excellent conclusion too, it’s nice to read a story so consistently published and completed.
Now time to go read all of your other stories!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! I try to make my updates consistent, a lot of my stories are more episodic and even if the story doesn't end I try to always make sure the "episode" is over before moving on to something else.
[Report This]Date: July 22 2022 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love that ending!
Also, I wasn’t expecting such an epic finale. All the main characters having their moment and fighting for James was fun to watch.
I was kinda surprised to see Asmodea meet her fate. I was not expecting that.
I’m glad Carol’s confidence is here to stay. It’s so fun reading about her toying with James and she gets to do what she wants.
I think one of the most underrated parts is that the ending isn’t really the ending. Carol hinting at all the adventures in the future just feels good as I finished reading.
Lastly, I love how Carol kept James in her crotch and it seems like she will keep him down there for the long term. So satisfying. I can’t wait to read your next story!
Author's Response:
Asmodea's ending is probably a temporary situation, for the most part she'll probably spend her days out with Mary doing monster and witch hunting and then spend time at home with Carol and James between missions, they probably won't keep her tiny forever either but I think she deserves it a little after all that!
Also most of my stories either have an open ending or one that implies more adventure to come, it's nice to think they kept having size changing fun even if they lived happily ever after. Glad you enjoyed it, hope to see you review again!
[Report This]Date: July 21 2022 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Really enjoyed the climax to this one. I didn't really expect Mary to go dark mode or for Asmodea to feel any regret like at all. I really enjoyed the size difference in this one even if it got extreme by the end. If you ever revisit this one I wouldn't mind seeing Carol do good on her promise and have James explore her at minimum height lol.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it, Asmodea managed to corrupt everyone like she wanted but she got a little too successful and spooked herself lol. Asmodea is odd, she definitely would prefer everyone be evil or at least more chaotic, but by the end she's too attached to the main characters to want to see it all end badly.