[Report This]Date: July 06 2022 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Homebound
This is great. Keep it up!
Date: July 04 2022 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Homebound
I like this so far.
Date: July 03 2022 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Homebound
Great start I can't wait to see how their relationship develops as the story goes on.
[Report This]Date: July 03 2022 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Homebound
Really liking the world building in this one! I love how the giants and normal sized people coexist in a peaceful manner with the different sections of the city. Its a great contrast to the conflict in the school setting. I also love the huge size difference between the giants and humans since it makes them even more imppressive. Lastly, I'm really enjoying the dynamic between Tom and Sophie even if its a bit corny its just so sweet and I hope to see more of it soon!
Cant wait to see how you build more of the lore and characters as you go on.
[Report This]Date: July 03 2022 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Homebound
I like the worldbuilding, it surprisingly makes sense that after high school, once people are no longer moody teenagers, giants really don't shock tinies anymore and just have normal jobs and routines. The dynamic between the main characters is good though Sophie's enamorment somewhat came out of nowhere and is perhaps progressing too quickly to be believable.
[Report This]Date: July 02 2022 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Homebound
Absolutely loved it! I’m a huge fan of the bully-to-lover genre, and this is shaping up to be a very entertaining story! So excited to see how things go the next day!