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Reviewer: thoria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2022 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 19: Perfection

Holy hell when i thought there is no way this could get even better, you overdeliver by a thousand!! Im speechless how good this chapter was but i shouldnt even be surprised at this lol 😊 thank you so much for sharing this masterpiece with us   and a big thanks to gtortoise for helping you along the way i cant wait for the final chapter(s)seriously amazing!!!!!!!😇



Author's Response:

Wow! Thank you! Over delivering by 1000 sounds like a very big deal 😂 thank you so, so much!

Yeah gtortoise has been a massive help in a bunch of chapters. His writing is amazing so I'm always happy to get some help. The whole Amber face sitting Vasquez scene was his idea (which I think really tied the scene together in a way that I wouldn't have been able to)!

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