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Reviewer: thoria Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2022 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 16: An uneasy truce

This amber arc is amazing, so well done once again 😇 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm really happy that people are enjoying it all because I was super worried it was too brutal. Apparently, I can just go wild and people will like it 😂

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2022 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 16: An uneasy truce

Short but sweet, but without a doubt a well written chapter as always. 

This chapter really again nails home the sadistic power trip Amber is on.As well as showing her use of her size in a dominating fashion as well as fitting, she would get off on subjugating and dominating the .gangs, especially the Lobos and other ethnicity's she would view "beneath her" and killing those who can't (and killing them just for kicks)

Amber really is a psychotic evil bitch who needs to go down. 

The sexual content was well written, and the description of Amber taking on the bullets and growing larger really shows just how outmatched everyone else is.

Hopefully someone *cough Vasquez cough* will soon be big enough to put her in her place/end her XD 

Excited to read more as always, you're doing a great job leading up to Ambers inevitable downfall. As said before I hope it's fitting (and painful for Smith when he gets his own commeuppance). Amber being killed by Vasquez would be great revenge for her fellow gang members, as well as the non-aryan prisoners who were killed by Amber.

And ending her under her foot would be both fitting, as well as definitely something Amber would consider an insult to her, being killed under the foot of a strong, latina woman. (or just killed by her in general, but the foot crush/stomp would definitely be symbolic as well as her being put beneath someone she viewed as beneath her)

And would also call back to Amber using her foot to kill people before.

Can't wait to read more, this was a surprising update as I thought the next chapter would take longer to come. 

Thank's for posting :) 





Author's Response:

Thank you and you're very welcome! 

Glad you're enjoying Amber's reign and how it's building up tension!

I never considered the whole under foot thing. I guess Amber does enjoy stomping people 🤔

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