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Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 09 2022 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 9: G37 Trial - Week 5 part 3

Ok, I saw the responce to the earlier review and you were write XD I did love this chapter!

Firstly, I loved the scene with Jennifer and Vasquez in their cell when Vasquez was talking about her younger years. 

It was a nice softer scene and gave us more insight into her character. 

For her, the growth and experiments aren't just a physical/dominant/sexual thing.... (well there are aspects of it there)

But the more personal reasons tying back in with her being weaker and struggling to make herself stronger for so long, and how she achieved it after joining the Lobos.

And now she has a chance to further that strength and not go back to being weak, and vulnerable.

Makes so much sense.

I loved the fact she wasn't scared of Smith's fearmongering, and took it in stride.

And the fact she's now bigger, and stronger (the transformation/growth scene was so well done. You could really picture and imagine her just becoming bigger and bursting out of her restraints )

Trish can be scared all she wants, I am freaking loving Vasquez (as said before, she's my favourite character.)

I just want her to come out on top in the end, and for Jennifer to be by her side (but maybe not as big? XD) but yeah, Vasquez is great and I need more of her, so I am off to read the next chapter. 

Reviewer: thoria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2022 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 9: G37 Trial - Week 5 part 3

So good :)

i was worried for abit that vasquez would not remain the biggest. Happy she did! Also that moment when jennifer and trish wanted to lock hands and the nurse helped them was adorable 😇



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story 😁

Yeah,  I'm trying my best not to be tooooooo biased towards Vasquez, but having her be so massive is a lot of fun while writing.

I've been trying to build up Jennifer and Trish having a wholesome relationship. Warm and cuddly and the other side of the coin to Vasquez and Jennifer which is rough, wild and very lust driven.

So you saying adorable is the highest praise possible for that scene, thank you 😭!


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