Date: November 26 2022 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 20: Grief
What a fantastic story! Thrilling all the way through and constantly intense. Great job with the delightfully horrific characters too, they were a joy to hate.
Burning out the G37 is such a visceral scene, especially with Vasquez’s usual brute force approach to it.
It definitely makes the most sense here for Vasquez to grow, but I'm still really intrigued by the other options. Especially by what a grieving Jennifer might have done to Amber if she didn't get to Vasquez in time.
Can't wait to see your next work!
Thank you! I was terrified the entire way through that I'd somehow compromise quality, so your words mean a lot. I still think I can improve this last chapter and will for sure flesh it out more when I have time.
The only way with Vasquez is brute force, haha. She's pretty much wrath distilled into a 55 foot tall woman.
I'm most looking forward to the Jennifer timeline tbh.
I have some ideas for short stories (a size theft centred plot and one maybe tailored around the seven sins as growth triggers), but I'm eager to start the continuation of this story too. I have a lot of ideas that never got included in this that can be.
Date: November 24 2022 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 20: Grief
Cant believe i was starting to feel bad for Amber even after what she did.
imagine screaming up to a 55ft tall muscle amazon 😳 thats pretty ballsy since you know what she is capable of, guess thats why she is the leader and also speaks of the respect Vasquez have for Maria.
I might have missed it but did Vasquez realise it was Jennifer that made her grow with the new serum since she was kinda out of it during that part or did she just think it was the g37? If she was even thinking at all during the rampage lol i guess she might not have time to think about it since she was overflowing with rage.
I had that sad feeling when you know a great series is ending these last chapters, but these last chapters have been so amazingly good and you tied evrything up and made such a good ending that im just happy how it turned out instead of being sad that it ended, hope that makes some kinda sence lol 😂
SO FREKKIN AMAZING!!!!! Once again thanks you so much for sharing this incredible story and to gtortoise for helping.
Enjoy a super well deserved break😇
Right!? As I was writing I started to feel bad too, haha. That influenced Jennifer's reaction, actually.
So Maria is incredibly manipulative. She worded what she said very carefully to keep Vasquez in the palm of her hand. Blaming her and twisting the truth stopped her from being stomped into nothing, haha. Years of practise manipulating Vasquez meant she could do it and get away with it.
So, your review just helped me rewrite pray of the chapter and clarify some things I wanted to convey. Vasquez currently doesn't know Jennifer saved her or why she grew. She doesn't even know G38 exists. Coming back from death and ask the anger, etc has her not questioning anything. In the holding cells she didn't even really see/register Jennifer completely. But yeah, thanks for the question and helping hone the story!
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the closing of this part of the story. I know I said I wanted a break but I'm already itching to start writing part 2.... Biggest bitch in lab C 👀
Date: November 19 2022 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 19: Perfection
Holy hell when i thought there is no way this could get even better, you overdeliver by a thousand!! Im speechless how good this chapter was but i shouldnt even be surprised at this lol 😊 thank you so much for sharing this masterpiece with us and a big thanks to gtortoise for helping you along the way i cant wait for the final chapter(s)seriously amazing!!!!!!!😇
Wow! Thank you! Over delivering by 1000 sounds like a very big deal 😂 thank you so, so much!
Yeah gtortoise has been a massive help in a bunch of chapters. His writing is amazing so I'm always happy to get some help. The whole Amber face sitting Vasquez scene was his idea (which I think really tied the scene together in a way that I wouldn't have been able to)!
Date: November 18 2022 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 18: One last chance
Hey! I’m late to the game on this one but WOOOOOWW what an incredible story!! You hardly ever get protagonists as interesting as Jennifer and the plot is so well paced and ridiculously compelling. Also the third act as been one of the best evil rampaging giantess content I’ve read in a looooong time. Just cause Jen is my girl I’m still hoping she ends up “biggest bitch” at Godzilla size lol but I guess I’ll have to wait and see. Excited for more!
You've found the story at a great time, to be honest! Just two chapters left and them I'm going to create one (or two alternate time lines).
Thank you so much! I'm glad the characters and the plot are compelling and pacing was alright (I've been worried it might be boring to some)
I actually just saw your vote on twitter before this review, so I'm sure you saw the result of the poll. Godzilla Jen won the votes and will have her own limelight to bask in.
Date: November 12 2022 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 18: One last chance
Another fantastic chapter. There's always a bittersweet feeling that comes from knowing that a story as good as this is approaching an epic conclusion.
As for who gets the G38, Vasquez makes sense of course, and I can’t wait to see just how big our Biggest Bitch will be at the end. Personally, I’m rooting for an alternate end with Jennifer, to allow her to truly let loose with her feelings after being pushed down for so long. And because I’m a twisted individual, I fully support the idea of a truly devastating bad ending with Amber getting it.
Very excited for the final sequence.
In all honesty, it's a bit bitter sweet for me too! I keep questioning if I should have slowed down more and explored their other sizes at time went on. I had ideas for some guard sanctioned fighting ring and stuff like that. I have no idea what I'll do with all the time free time not writing....
I guess writing a new story 😅
I'll do my best to deliver on this ending as well as the Jennifer ending! It looks like she's winning the votes (currently ahead with 75%). I'll have to think about the Amber ending a bit more to make it impactful.
Date: November 10 2022 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 18: One last chance
Amazing once again 😇
To me Vásquez have been my star of the series so i feel like this was deserved 😇, even if all i have been thinking about the last chapters have been amber she really stole the ending so far.
I dont have twitter, so i cant vote but i dont really have a opinion on trish or jennifer getting it, since i feel like Vásquez was my top1 pick and somthing wicked inside me had amber as second lol😈 but if you do another ending im of course going to read it since you are that amazing.
Thank you 😭
Haha, I'm glad Vasquez has left an impression.
I literally posted a message earlier today talking about Amber maybe having got the shot, haha. I should have put her in the poll! I'll see how many votes get registered. If it's many then I might just do a 'bad' ending instead 👀
Date: November 10 2022 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 18: One last chance
Way to build the suspense! Friggin awesome! Keep up the great dialogue and descriptions of the action! Another worthy chapter to this story.
I appreciate it! I wasn't sure if I built the suspense for too long in this one so it's nice to hear some validation, haha
Date: October 30 2022 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 17: The clash
Every chapter is somehow getting better and better and it was already 10/10 from the first chapters, from the guillotine the guard and when Alvarez was trying to hide in her hiding spot from amber, and the soft vore, so beautiful and creative descriptions i want to keep highlighting things but then i would just copy the entire page lol
so frekkin good!!!😇
Hahah, thank you! I'm always trying to improve so that's incredible to hear.
And honestly, highlight away. I've taken a lot of inspiration from other authors and it's probably pretty apparent if you read their works 😂
Date: October 30 2022 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 17: The clash
still hope Jennifer grows
She juuuuust might.
Nah, but as soon as I post next chapter, I'm creating a poll for an alternative ending. What I post is the cannon ending, but I'll make chapter 18 (and maybe 19) b based on popular demand. So you're going to see two endings either way :p
Statistically, I'm thinking one will be Jennifer no matter what.
Date: October 30 2022 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 17: The clash
I applaud you for not holding back on the violence in this chapter, really shows a realistic (and brutal) portrayal of how far someone with Amber's mindset would go.
When you said she goes full rampage, you did not disappoint.
The imagery of her chomping off the guards head was very vivid, and the way she tore through the other so easily.
I have to say the Vasquez and Trish tag teaming Amber was great XD
And that final section!!
XD (I think I know we're you're going though with Jennifer grabbing the syringe. Vasquez may seem dead, but is probably still alive enough for that dose to heal her and turn her into a gigantic powerhouse of a latina woman.....well, more so than she already is) Come on Jennifer! inject her and let Vasquez re-take her position as biggest bitch XD
I doubt this is her end, she still needs to put Amber in her place/under her and kill her. Especially now that Amber stomped on her, she deserves a foot stomping of her own XD
And Smith!!! Ooh, I am on the edge of my seat now just wishing for the next chapter to be here.
Another very visual/visceral chapter in terms of content, but I am not complaining, you weave the violent acts in so well with the characters, and it all plays out and flows greatly while reading.
As I said, I can't wait for the next chapter XD (And hopefully Vasquez getting back up, she can't be 'dead dead')
Hahaha, man you gave this review fast! Thank you for being so quick on the draw and always interacting with me :D
I won't say any spoilers, of course, but I can tell you that there's going to be a poll with the next chapter. You can vote for an alternative ending so if things don't pan out the way you wanted in the cannon, then you can see another way it can go.
As for Amber and Smith... Let's see what happens when they come together. Will he survive her?
Date: October 23 2022 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 16: An uneasy truce
This amber arc is amazing, so well done once again 😇
Thank you! I'm really happy that people are enjoying it all because I was super worried it was too brutal. Apparently, I can just go wild and people will like it 😂
Date: October 23 2022 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 16: An uneasy truce
Short but sweet, but without a doubt a well written chapter as always.
This chapter really again nails home the sadistic power trip Amber is on.As well as showing her use of her size in a dominating fashion as well as fitting, she would get off on subjugating and dominating the .gangs, especially the Lobos and other ethnicity's she would view "beneath her" and killing those who can't (and killing them just for kicks)
Amber really is a psychotic evil bitch who needs to go down.
The sexual content was well written, and the description of Amber taking on the bullets and growing larger really shows just how outmatched everyone else is.
Hopefully someone *cough Vasquez cough* will soon be big enough to put her in her place/end her XD
Excited to read more as always, you're doing a great job leading up to Ambers inevitable downfall. As said before I hope it's fitting (and painful for Smith when he gets his own commeuppance). Amber being killed by Vasquez would be great revenge for her fellow gang members, as well as the non-aryan prisoners who were killed by Amber.
And ending her under her foot would be both fitting, as well as definitely something Amber would consider an insult to her, being killed under the foot of a strong, latina woman. (or just killed by her in general, but the foot crush/stomp would definitely be symbolic as well as her being put beneath someone she viewed as beneath her)
And would also call back to Amber using her foot to kill people before.
Can't wait to read more, this was a surprising update as I thought the next chapter would take longer to come.
Thank's for posting :)
Thank you and you're very welcome!
Glad you're enjoying Amber's reign and how it's building up tension!
I never considered the whole under foot thing. I guess Amber does enjoy stomping people 🤔
Date: October 23 2022 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: G37 Trial - Week 3
An absolutely amazing chapter! The action is riveting and I can't wait to see what happens next. Great dialogue and descriptions!
Hey, thank you! I was actually very worried about the dialogue so you calling it out specifically means a lot.
I hate bad dialogue but also feel like it's subjective so always wonder if people might hate MY dialogue, haha
Date: October 20 2022 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 15: Vendetta
Another great chapter. I’m really loving Amber’s scenes here, hope we get to see a lot more of her rampage before the conclusion.
As for fighting fire with fire, I’m incredibly torn on who would be the best option, but am actually leaning towards Jennifer, just so she gets a chance to be the biggest for once.
Whoever you choose though, I’m sure it will be great!
Thank you! The next chapter is almost done and it has a lot of of Amber and her activities!
I have a plan in mind for how this all happens buuuut, I might do a poll and do an alternate ending for fun too 🤔
Date: October 17 2022 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 15: Vendetta
great story! i hope Jennifer gets the G38
Interesting! I might have to make a poll to see who people want to grow the most. I didn't think Jennifer have much backing but I could be wrong!
Date: October 17 2022 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 15: Vendetta
A concentrated dose....I wonder who that could go to XD
I mean I haven't made my desires a secret, it has to go to Vasquez she's the biggest (besides Amber) so giving it to her would make sense in order to right fire with fire.
I hope she grows to be as big as Amber at least (or better yet, bigger XD) just wanting to see her beat Amber into a bloody pulp, or under her foot would be a fun read.
I mean....Amber is a nazi....and is brutal. The way you wrote the brutal scenes is again well written though, you really did a great job painting a picture of her actions.
When she had the prisoner Wendy in her grip, I thought she was going to pop/destroy her boobs with her fingers like squashing grapes, but having her slam her between her now giant breasts was more fitting (in her own fucked up/sadistic mindset)
Again, I love that Vasquez knows something was up with Jennifer not getting her dose, and knowing there was something going on.
I can't wait to read more! (again, Vasquez has to reclaim her title as biggest bitch XD)
And Smith!! That bald bastard needs to get his own comeuppance for his actions.....and I hope it hurts :)
Hahaha, I love how invested you are in the characters! I won't spoil anything but yeah, Amber and Smith have to get their just desserts.... Right? 👀
I did wonder if Amber should be even more brutal with Wendy's boobs, but thought it was best to shy away from it. I'm doing my best to walk the line of brutality without being gratuitous 😅
Date: October 17 2022 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 14: Answers
I totally missed this chapter being posted!
Just finished reading it and it was a nice explanatory chapter. Nice work incorporating Jones/Cass's backstory and making Smith look like even more of a dick.
I love that Vasquez knew that something was up with Jennifer not getting her dose.
And now Amber.....damn, I hope fighting fire with fire means Vasquez is going to get bigger to put that nazi bitch down XD
Yeah, this chapter was a lot more talking and a little less action. Buuuut, it does explain somethings and, of course, we got to see Amber having fun!
Fight fire with fire means SOMEONE is going to be growing for sure
Date: October 16 2022 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: G37 Trial - Week 3
Another fantastic chapter! Very well written. Hope the next chapter is soon!
Thank you! The next chapter is already in the works 😁 I'll try to get it out this week but I'm busier than I thought I'd be
Date: September 30 2022 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1: G37 Trial - Week 3
This is a really interesting set up, great imagery too.
Thank you! Yeah, I thought it would make for a fun setting and also provide a background reason for the large ladies to be villainous from the get go!
Date: September 24 2022 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 13: A headless snake can still bite
Such a great chapter. I’d say that the fun starts now, but this story has been a joy to read all the way through.
Loved the descriptions of the more violent acts, personally I really like the crueler side of things, so hopefully there’s a lot more of it.
Eager to see if someone else is gonna need to get a whole lot bigger now to deal with this new problem.
Also, given that we might now be approaching those kinds of scales, I’d love if the excessive eating required started to extend to more than just the inmate’s food, especially given how much I enjoyed the previous consumption scenes. If hard vore isn’t on the books though, that’s totally understandable.
In any case, can’t wait to see more!
I'd not even considered vore in this story to be honest. I'm not against writing about it at all, but it wasn't something I imagined. I'll think about it though, haha. I can totally imagine omega Amber eating people in a bid to fuel more growth. Even if I don't go forward with it in this story I'll explore it in another sometime.
I'm glad you liked the more cruel side of things though! Very happy with the response I've gotten since I was so worried initially.
Overjoyed that you've liked everything so far and the 'fun' has been throughout!