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Reviewer: ColdAtlas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2022 1:14 AM Title: August

Where does Eve get these ideas to do with a shrinkee SO? Does she surf on subreddits for ideas? 


Also, I did read those other shrinkee stories you had when you released them. I have a bad habit of not leaving reviews for stories I really like. :(



Author's Response:

She probably spent a lot of time doing "research" during the phase when she was trying to catch Evan lol.

Reviewer: kenrios Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 27 2022 1:02 AM Title: April

I don't know why I have a feeling Amber won't sit idly by. Let's see, for now I'm glad those two lovebirds are back.

Author's Response: We haven't seen the last of her

Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2022 11:51 PM Title: April

Glad I waited on reading the March chapter until after April was out. Would have left me in a sour mood with how the March chapter ended. 

Also, some reviewers here have some pretty strange ideas with how they think this will go. You’d think they‘ve never read any of your stories before.



Author's Response:

Looking at the hits and number of reviews this one is rapidly becoming my most popular story, so a lot of people probably haven't read my other ones lol. The March chapter does end on a pretty depressing note, obviously that's not where this story ended or will end, but I'm glad it hit the intended emotional note.

Reviewer: crowtomas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2022 11:17 PM Title: April

This is clearly building up to a finale where Amber swoops in, chips Evan, gets the house, and Eve is forced to stay with them both as a slave by proxy. Gotta say this is a lot darker than your usual stuff but I’m digging it. 



Author's Response:

And then she puts the cat down too just for kicks right? Glad you're enjoying the story lol

Reviewer: Iunno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2022 10:12 PM Title: April

Ok so now Imma theorize that Amber and the gang are gonna try to steal Evan instead of just Amber herself as revenge. In doing so, Laurie may be there and will.be held down by like three or two of the girls and Eve will try and get Evan from Amber. Or they just restrict Eve while Amber is about to do something of Laurie isn't there then they dramatically shrink! Then they get playfully tortured by Eve and possibly Laurie before going to the authorities. That's my prediction.



Author's Response:

I'll say that Amber has not made her last play at our heroes yet

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2022 9:39 PM Title: April

Ha! Take that, Amber!

Author's Response:

Pride goeth something something something

Reviewer: imaybegae Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2022 4:43 PM Title: March

The tension! It’s tearing me up. Anyways, is this a climax of sorts?



Author's Response:

Of sorts, our protagonists have a few more things ahead of them yet.

Reviewer: latke Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2022 7:05 AM Title: March

between the mechanics of shrunken women in the steakhouse scene as well as the waiver/spa last chapter, and the sneezing this chapter, I can't help but feel a certain someone has a big storm coming, though I could be wrong. Aside from that, I think this has become one of my favourite stories of yours, can't wait to see where it goes next!



Author's Response:

Thanks, we're moving into the final act

Reviewer: ZmanAttackz Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2022 3:09 AM Title: March

I love the slow burn of this story it's the best writing I've read in forever



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm trying to keep the pacing on point in this one.

Reviewer: ColdAtlas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2022 2:43 AM Title: August

Wow Evan just took a page out of the Rambo book. Starting to think he may be writing his own book on being a Anti-hunter.



Author's Response:

Evan is a nightmare scenario for most cruel giants, luckily for them he doesn't leave the house much

Reviewer: rrclover Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2022 1:43 AM Title: August

Also how long if you got the virsue till u shrink im just wonder? Also funy even having a cold will going to doctor who told him he had shrinkiees



Author's Response:

You get about 4-5 months, first you get cold symptoms for a week, the nothing happens for months, then for the last few days you get feverish, itchy, and delusional, then boom you shrink pretty much all at once.

Reviewer: Lupin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2022 12:50 AM Title: March

Didn't expect this one to be as heartbreaking as it is and I didn't expect Evan to go as extreme as he did in the end. Like even if Eve said those things he didn't even try to press her about it before threatening her with murder so he's in the wrong. You succesfully made me feel as empty as Eve in that scene. Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response:

Evan's response is supposed to be over the top and going too far. He's a tiny guy in a world that's not friendly to them, despite his bravado he's not nearly as secure as he'd like everyone to think, and when confronted with something like this he's lashing out.

Reviewer: rrclover Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2022 12:28 AM Title: March

Mmmm wondering if ambers got a cold like virus mmmmm also funny shes dating a tiny hunter



Author's Response:

It's probably just the seasonal allergies, right?

Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2022 12:14 AM Title: December

I absolutely love the chemistry between the two main leads, as well as the subtle hints towards why certain characters act the way they do. You always seem to have a knack for good character dynamics, but this one is especially quite good imo. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I try my best to make an engaging set of characters for each story.

Reviewer: kenrios Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2022 11:18 PM Title: March

Wow, this just keeps getting better. It is an exciting development of events. I assumed that Amber would be that, the discordant note between those two. Oh, and Amber meets a guy who's a tinie hunter. wow that doesn't sound good



Author's Response: Yeah, Amber is our point of conflict, putting pressure on the right points to tear our protagonists apart.

Reviewer: alb Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2022 11:08 PM Title: August

I have to say it has been a good long while since i read a story THIS good. Plot, lewd stuff and characters. 1 chapter a day too with an ending in sight(most stories on this site end up unfinished). This is nothing short of an absolute treat and i'm excited to see how it all ends. Cheers!



Author's Response:

Thanks! We're all going into this finale together, hope it makes the whole thing worth it!

Reviewer: eliwoodx Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2022 4:41 PM Title: February

This story just keeps getting better



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2022 3:55 PM Title: February

Reading the medical waivers is important... sure hope that doesn't come back to haunt anyone in a poetic justice kinda way... would be a shame if a poor tipper found herself similarly... disadvantaged.



Author's Response:

it sure would be unfortunate

Reviewer: Kry Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 25 2022 11:08 AM Title: February

I’m liking the world-building here, but I do have a question about infection rates.

This chapter establishes that 2% of males are susceptible and 0.1% of females are susceptible, which by itself would make about 1 in every 21 tinies female. Given that female tinies are seemingly rare enough that most people have never seen one, but male tinies appear to be common enough that encountering one is not treated as particularly unusual, I’m presuming that not being able to catch the airborne virus is a major factor here.

So like, are males getting close to that 2% in actual cases (i.e. actual tinies), while females are still well below the 0.1%? Sorry if that’s overly technical.



Author's Response:

Don't worry about a question being overly technical I'm happy to answer any of them. It seems you've grasped the information being conveyed, vulnerability to the shrinking virus is determined by genetics, with men having around a rate of 2% and women having a rate of 0.1%, but in addition males will get it from the air so it's a lot easier for them to get close to the maximum number of actual cases. Females on the other hand don't get it from the air and require relatively lengthy direct contact with an individual displaying symptoms (being tiny) and since tiny men are a relatively small and usually socially isolated part of the population the 0.1% of women vulnerable aren't likely to max out on cases if that makes sense.

I don't have a firm timeline or anything, but my idea is that the shrinking epidemic has been going on for years at this point, with a few "late bloomers" like poor Charles getting it relatively late, probably 90% of the vulnerable male population has shrunk by the time the story starts. Where it is for vulnerable women isn't clear, but like Eve said most women don't consider getting shrunk a major concern.

Reviewer: Gerbo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2022 4:24 AM Title: August

Well done, the one cent tip was particularly cruel.



Author's Response:

Adding insult to the injury

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