[Report This]Date: October 12 2022 10:54 PM Title: (Day 1) A Bad Day to Be Human
Great story. Are you going to eventually follow Richard's offspring as they grow up to become pets or food?
Author's Response:
Thanks man, and I don't think I'll ever have a POV other than Richard or Galea's in this story, but his offspring could become characters once/if we get there. If I end up wanting to follow another character, his offspring or otherwise, I'd prob start a new story, as this is really just Richard's (and Galea's) story.
Date: June 15 2022 12:53 PM Title: (Day 1) A Bad Day to Be Human
This is a really nice intro, I’ve only read chapter 1 so far but you have a very broad range of vocabulary and adjectives in your writing that really makes it an enjoyable read.
Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks my man, glad it is resonating with you.
Date: June 15 2022 4:13 AM Title: (Day 1) A Bad Day to Be Human
Interesting to see a story set in the "humanity's subjugation" universe. As usual, elf treatment of humans is horrific. At least Richard got a better deal than most. It's also interesting to see just how the elves produce so many humans to keep up with demand. I wonder if they enchant them to breed and grow faster or something given how long it normally takes for humans to give birth and mature.
Author's Response:
I know there is time magic available in the setting + other magical (or maybe drug) ways of increasing fertility, but that's more for a mass production farm. This one is a bit more specialized, might try to write a visit in to a mass production farm at some point in the story, though.