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Reviewer: slavetowomen Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2022 8:42 PM Title: A Most Curious Tome

This story is absolutely amazing! It reminds me of a story I wrote a few years back, "A Mother Once Upon A Time" but with a more dominating tone and personality on the daughter's part. I love how detailed you get and can't wait to see more of this story come out. You can expect more feedback from me as the story progresses. 

If I at all am able to leave feedback that is taken into account when writing the story, it's that I would recommend letting the next chapter or two be more focused on just the two of them before Johanna's girlfriend or someone else is introduced. But obviously you have things well under control and if that doesn't end up being the case, I totally understand. Very excited to see where this goes. 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I've definitely read your stories (I was a particularly big fan of Mandy's Fantasy) and hearing this from you means a lot! This is one of the rare situations where the entire story is actually drafted out (we're already more than halfway through) though it's very likely there will be continuations that are commissioned by the og commissioner so be on the lookout! And I will definitely consider absolutely any suggestions you may have :))

Reviewer: IamtheWalrus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2022 1:52 AM Title: Park Bench

This story is JUST what I was looking for in a story! The F/f dynamic. The one with the power being both younger and humiliating her living plaything both at "normal" size and tiny size...just perfect! I look forward to seeing more of this amazing story. My only request and suggestion is that you continue to have the daughter using her mother as her talking pet both at her normal size and her tiny size. 

Author's Response:

Your glowing praise is such a blessing, I'm glad to hear you enjoyed! Don't worry, I have a feeling you'll enjoy what we have to come :)

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2022 1:03 AM Title: Park Bench

Great start

Author's Response:

Thx for that~

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