Reviewer: Greenanon Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2022 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 8 Pyrrhic Victory

It looks like Tom and Hinba might find themselves separated, right as they were finally starting to have real feelings for each other. This is a pretty compelling story and the relationship between the leads is fun. The world you've created here is interesting, it certainly has a unique and wild flavor to it, for lack of a better description.