[Report This]Date: June 04 2022 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 7 Back Home
I SO LOVE THIS STORY.
You've kept true to the up the characters of Hinba and Tom very well this whole time. At the same time the relationship has totally been developing. We're back to only getting Tom's perspective on each chapter since the epilogue of part 1, yet it comes across very well that Hinba's care and attachment is building. It would be way to simple and would end the dynamic if she went full gentle anytime before now, and keeping to her demon tendencies while protecting and caring about how tom perceives her as not abusive has been perfect. Every chapter whether its plot or sexy based has been top notch.
For what's coming next, I am eagerly anticipating Tom's upcoming decision on if he's going to break the Worldstone on the earth or demon side. Its a huge climactic moment in him trusting Hinba long term, and she better damn appreciate it if he chooses to stay with her.