Date: March 18 2024 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 12. An Avoidable Conflict I
Hmmm, I must admit I didn't like this last chapter as much as the previous ones. I don't think it was the perspective shifting, but I really missed Ana, finding people like Rashtahl and forcing them to do what Ana wants. This was one of the things I liked so much before is that Ana was even able to outdo Lisa. So yeah, I missed that narrative touch of Ana's command to her people not being avoidable by them. I did enjoy that Lavial was getting possessive with her little human, so I liked that bit.
Author's Response:
That’s very understandable. However, it is a big conflict with multiple moving parts, I didn’t personally think it would make sense for Ana to have the main spotlight here. Overall, I do like having big conflicts as opportunities to focus on other areas that aren’t the main cast. Which I think is fair, considering the previous chapter was very intense with Ana. In that note, the next chapter also won’t feature her too much.
The last chapter of the batch probably will though.
Thanks for reading! I know I took way too long with releasing this.