[Report This]Date: February 19 2024 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 5. Mana, Magic and Magecraft.
Nice work building man. I like how you make a lot of the giantesses feel so human, with their attitudes, ideals and personalities. Whether its the cruel bigoted Lisa, who'll probably be forever stuck in the pass or Ana (I absolutely adore my giant Queen she’s better than most) a hopeful queen of the future of the state but will slay you if you absolutely force her hand.
I'm just curious of how the Empire's of the continent will react to all the wars in the center of the continent, because as we know Empires always look to expand and conquer and that includes the giantness kingdom.
While I read this, i think would I have giantess wife over races like elves. An Elf! Probably not, way to dangerous even with magick enhancers or especially a Size Alteration Device so they can be altered to my height. That and why it'll be a absolute dream to me to be thrown in the shoes of Ana or Maria and smothered by their feet, chest, etc.
It's not that I don’t trust them to be gentle with me, it's more that i'd prefer to maximize my life expectancy. And being trampled (or any other activities) by Maria or other giantess is a easy way to drop it.
I may have read it wrong or forgot, but how does a giantness and a human like Ana and Leon have children again, I remember magick played a important role in it? But does the magick enlarged the sperm or do they shrink Ana down to a normal-size?
I definitely like how you make use of Azgaar’s fantasy map generator I use it constantly myself. You paint a much cleaner picture of the world.
The only recommendations I have is more Feet and smothering, branch out to other ethnic races and the imperial powers, but aside that you’re doing just great.
Also, just out curiosity what’s the giantess population of Ranate? And how do they live?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the super in depth review!
Yeah, after the first pilot chapter I wanted to explore the different attitudes of a country like Ranate and their views on humans. As such, I wrote the past of the country to have giantesses like Lisa who cling to their ways whereas giantesses like Ana hope for a better future. Whilst the narrative’s conflicts are about wars and fetish content like crushing humans and such, at its heart it’s really about the different ideals of each person and society. All of that clashing against one another. Ranate will painstakingly and slowly progress into being more human friendly but it won’t be easy. Even someone who wants to progress her society like Ana will have her own flaws in regards to this.
Currently the story is wrapping up its first arc, so it’s very fitting you’re talking about how the other empires of the land would react to what’s currently going on as that is most likely what the next arc will be about!
The way they have offspring isn’t too complex in its design, it’s literally just inserting the human in. However, without enchantments it’s incredibly easy to kill the human on purpose or by accident. So magic and enchantments became an important element for In not just this process but also just making the connection between the two species more powerful and plausible. Part of the reason why humans were considered so much less in the past in Ranate stemmed from how weak and easy they were to kill.
Once again, thanks for the review. I really appreciate reading in depth ones that go into each and every detail about the story! As for adding more smothering and stuff, I may add it in the future but I don’t think it’ll be a focus in chapter 12 and 13 necessarily. I should also branch out to other sentient species and imperials powers but for now I’d like this arc to be focused in with what we have already established.
As for the estimate of the population. I probably have it in my world building folder somewhere haha, it’s not on me at the moment so I can’t give you that number right now unfortunately. I may include it in a future chapter or side story.
Date: November 15 2022 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 5. Mana, Magic and Magecraft.
It will be interesting to see how Leon uses his newfound abilities glad he's able to help his new wife in more ways than simple companionship! I really like stories where the tiny characters have some utility to the story. Anyways I'm curious as to what's waiting on his "solo" adventure.
Author's Response:
I have some practical uses thought out already, it’ll really just be a demonstration of how using magic principles in a fight or a survival setting is greatly beneficial. At the very least, that’s how next chapter will go. His solo adventure, will also allow some time for me to focus on other characters for a duration of less interesting things going on with his adventure. At least for some bits of a chapter.
Anyway, thanks for reading. It’s much appreciated!
Date: November 14 2022 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 5. Mana, Magic and Magecraft.
Pretty good story so far! Do you think there will eventually be scenes where Ana might have some sexy time with her tiny husband? I don't think they've properly "consummated" their marriage.
Author's Response:
Thanks for review.
Ana and Leon will have their ‘sexy time’ eventually. It’s just kinda hard to focus on that right now. But I love writing fetish content with these two, so it’s only a matter of time. I’m thinking of saving it for the night of their third wedding ceremony. But that might be going too long term lol.