[Report This]Date: August 20 2022 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Roundtable
Really loving this story! It feels like the beginning of a really good fantasy novel. The fetish content coming as a secondary to aid plot is probably the best course of action if it helps the plot keep being this good.
Author's Response:
Really like writing the world building, and I just kinda felt that forcing in fetish stuff in this chapter wouldn’t make sense. So I didn’t. Instead it’ll be there next chapter, along with other stuff that needs to be covered before we can start the next arc (or phase?). Chapter 1 is really an intro chapter, chapter 2 adds in the start of a plot line with some world building and chapter 3 is a continuation of that. Chapter 4 will moving things in to training Leon for the next phase. Which I hope to include some fetish and non fetish stuff.
Really glad to hear people are enjoying, and the praise of it being like a fantasy novel means a lot because I’m going for something along those lines.
[Report This]Date: August 19 2022 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Roundtable
Good to see Leon has decided to take some initiative, I always like to see the tiny character have a greater story role. We'll see how his "training" goes and if he has any particular aptitude that might make him uniquely useful to a kingdom of giants. Keep going, you're doing well so far!
Author's Response:
I’ve always wanted to give him a more active role, my first ever story didn’t have such a character moment and that was a worthy criticism of that narrative. So, since I want this story to be longer, I do want to give Leon more narrative purpose. And allow him to make some big decisions. This particular story is about him and his relationship, but mostly about him. Hence, I added in a training segment to my plan for the next chapter, being some fetish content mixed in with some other ways to measure his competence. At least that’s what I’m thinking the next chapter specifically will be . Although I’m still deciding on that exactly that specific aptitude will be for him, and how he’ll be of specific use. I guess I have a small plan in my head, and will work around that.
Regardless of my rambling. Thanks for the review!