This is brilliant! I read this last week when it released on your Patreon and it’s everything I love in this kind of story. Your story writing and descriptive skills put mine to shame, and I’m absolutely a sucker for a cute couples story but with all the more raw, less savoury aspects of mouth play and vore very much still in play. More stories in this genre should embrace that, and I’m very glad you’re one of the writers that does. Bravo!