Reviewer: Edgedej4 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2022 12:42 PM Title: The External Hire

Cruelty written amazingly well. A plethora of words and adjectives were used, and an overall tidy and concise descriptive prose. Very good stuff. If anything, I’d only want the actual scene to be a bit longer, but that’s merely a personal nitpick. 

Author's Response:

Longer stories are definitely my bane. I am working on a long form super hero story, but it is proving as difficult as I'd imagined. I will work on getting better at it, though!

Thank you for the feedback and for reading!

Reviewer: tinyguy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2022 4:48 PM Title: The External Hire

Any future updates planned?

Author's Response:

Yep! I'm just really bad at finishing things, I've had sequels to Abduction and Dangerous Occupations done for months, I just keep getting distracted. I've also got a long form one that I want to write about a witch working for an otherworldly power, and I want the characterization in that to be on point. Worse still I've taken up writing GWA scripts, and have been universally bad at that, so I'm trying to improve there as well.

As far as Office Life and Death, yes, I will have more, but I really want to find scenarios that are both unique enough to merit writing and centered around an office setting. The "'Downsizing Our Workforce' thing is nice, but I think may have been overdone. I'm writing a non-Office story that features a tiny man attempting to domme his normal sized girlfriend, and it got me thinking about a setting where the boss was a shrunken man navigating the perils and perks of working with a series of employees who each present him with challenges.

All in all, I hope to get something out this weekend, although I don't know just yet what it will be.