Date: June 20 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Survival
This is an amazing story. I love how well an unaware story came out and stuck to being unaware where some writers give up on the idea and resort to the giantess eventually being aware of the tiny person(s). The description was amazing and it was right up my ally, since I am one of those weird guys who like descriptive violence in giantess stories. I hope to see more like this in the future.
Hehe thanks for the amazing review, too ;)
I love the descriptive stuff as well, so plenty more of that to come in the future. This was my first outing into unaware, more as a challenge to see if i could do it really as it wasn't originally a genre i enjoyed, but yeah, i definately enjoyed making the tinies out to be insects hehe ^_^ Shrinker Gmaes starts off unaware, but to be honest the intention of that one was for the tiny girl to be caught and humiliated by her friends so that goes into aware, so i'm guilty doing it too unfortunately lol :P Nothing to say i cant go on to do another fully unaware story at some point though :)
Date: April 08 2013 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Survival
My god I can't believe it! after reading one of your storys I stumbled on this one. This was the first story I ever read on this site way back in my lurker days and I have been looking for this one for a while.
Just gonna put this on my favorites so I don't lose it again.
Awesome ^_^ Cant believe the coincedence in this haha! Really glad your found this both enjoyable and memorable though, it does mean a lot to hear that people enjoy reading my work because of how much i enjoy writing it :)
thanks for rating!
Date: October 01 2009 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Survival
I would like to say that this story was fantastic! I myself am not a big fan of voilence though for some reason i find myself drawn to it. My favorite kind of giantess is gentle and crush...as much as that makes no sense at all. I hope to see more from you from the micro size. You're detail and description are bontiful and realistic. Keep up the Good Work!!
Hey, sorry for taking so long to reply to this! Thanks for the review, its much appreciated and made me really happy hearing how much you liked it ^_^ Realism is my main goal in my writing which might be a bit weird considering its all fantasy haha. Glad its worth it though!
Date: September 30 2009 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Survival
Great story - one of the best I've read in a long while.
I love the way you convey the giant girl's amusement and uncaring cruelty, and I love the pov from the shrunken woman also. You manage to provide rich detail of her experience without getting gory or focusing on pain, which is no mean feat when someone's being slowly squished and brutalized.
I also loved the scene where the girl spits on her. That was the scene that did it for me while I was reading.
I hope to see much more of your work in the future.
Hey, i know its been a long time since the review, so sorry for not replying! But thanks for taking the time to drop me a note, it was and is much appreciated :) Also knowing what people like in my writing gives me a good direction for how my other storys run ^_^
Date: June 03 2009 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Survival
Wow, love the way you handled her being stuck to the shoe at the end! Very visceral. :D
That next step looks like it'll be a doozy!
Author's Response: Thanks for the rating ^_^ I've been writing this in the time i've had between drinking and working lol, it wont be too long till part 2 is up :P
Date: June 02 2009 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Survival
Superb thus far. I like the description of the world from Nami's perspective. Can't wait to read more.
wow! i certainly didn't expect any reviews just yet, and not as nice as that ^_^ thanks very much!
I'll try not to keep you waiting for the second half :)